My
first adult crime fiction novel, Kill or Die was released in May of this year, but I'd actually written the first version of it some years previously. At the time I didn't
get far in finding a publisher. I sent it to two publishers and their feedback totally contradicted each other. One said it was too gory and graphic, the other said it wasn't
graphic enough for a crime novel.
So,
what did I do? Put it away in a drawer and got on with something
else. Some years later I came across the manuscript again, and saw
that there was a hand written comment at the bottom saying how much
the reader liked my style.
When you're just a novice writer, a rejection is a
rejection. It's only through experience that you get to read between
the lines, and learn how to pick up on what the editor did and didn't
like and, if you use your brain, you'll suggest making a few changes. At the time though, I pushed it away in a drawer and forgot all about it.
Then, after re-discovering it, reading it again and seeing for myself how it could be improved, I
got to work on the re-write with the aim of this time persevering in
finding a publisher. Amazingly the first publisher I sent it to
liked it and said they wanted to publish it. Months of interaction
followed before I realised that the company was bogus! Quickly
extracting myself from being associated with them, I was a little
wary of sending it off anywhere else.
However,
my next publisher – Bloodhound Books, with the lovely Betsy Freeman
Freavly and her husband Fred at the helm, it turned out to be the
best decision ever.
They have proved to be a great publisher to work
with, who really work hard for their authors. They have a Facebook
page for just the authors so we can share our sorrows and
celebrations, and have the occasional meet up too.
I was recently at
the Theakston Old Peculiar Crime Festival in Harrogate, where lots of
Bloodhound authors as well as Betsy and Fred all got together. And it was great fun!
The
Harrogate Festival was just brilliant, and I came away after the four
days totally inspired after listening to talks by world famous
authors such as Lee Child, Ian Rankin, Mark Billingham, Val McDermid
and many others. I even got to meet Lee Child!
I'm
working on another book now, which I'm hoping Bloodhound Books will
accept. But meanwhile here's the blurb and an extract from Kill or
Die which I hope you will enjoy:
A
vicious burglary goes horribly wrong when an elderly victim is killed
and one of the burglars is injured.
In
the detached house next door, Julia is preparing to leave her
husband. He has let her down for the last time and her bags are
packed. Taking their eight-year-old daughter, Lucy, from her bed they
set off in the fog.
But
on this cold, dark night, fate steps in and these strangers collide.
When
Vincent and Nash abduct the mother and daughter, and take them to a
derelict house, the situation takes a grave turn.
Meanwhile,
Julia's husband, Ian, is distraught that his wife and daughter have
left, and when the murder and burglary are discovered, suspicion
falls on him.
For
Ian, Julia and Lucy, life is about to become a nightmare.
Can
Julia and Lucy escape from the twisted criminals?
What
will Julia decide when the choice is – kill or die?
Extract
from Kill or Die:
The
car's headlights came out of nowhere, as Julia pulled out of her
drive. She instinctively tried to swerve, but there was no avoiding
the impact. It was slight, a faint tinkling of glass breaking – a
sidelight or indicator light. In the back, Lucy buckled into her
seat, cried out in fright.
Through
the fog, Julia distinctively saw the driver brace his arms against
the steering wheel, but his passenger shot forward, cracking his head
against the windscreen so hard a circular cobweb effect of
blood-smeared shattered glass instantly appeared, before he
ricocheted back into his seat.
“God!
That must have hurt. Stay here, Lucy. He might need an ambulance.”
She
got out, heart thumping, and dashed to the other car's passenger
door. She was aware of the driver getting out, and walking around the
back of his car towards her. He was tall, taller than Ian, and he was
five eleven. This man was broad shouldered, too, and dressed all in
black, like a large shadow she was only barely aware off, as she
focussed on the passenger. He didn't seem to have moved since
ricocheting back into his seat. She hoped to God he wasn't seriously
injured.
“Shall
I call an ambulance? I think your passenger is hu...”
Her
question was left hanging in the air, as Julia realised she couldn't
make out the driver's face, because he was wearing a woollen
balaclava. Something stirred in the pit of her stomach. A slight
warning. She ignored it. It was a horrible night. Why wouldn't
someone wear a balaclava? What mattered was the passenger wasn't
moving. Was he unconscious? Dead? God, she hoped not.
She
went to open the passenger door when an arm, clad in black leather,
was thrust in front of her, shoving her hand aside, and yanking open
the passenger door. The thick smell of leather filled her senses, as
he crowded over her.
“He couldn't have been
wearing his seat belt...” she tried to say, but then the driver
spoke.
“Nash,
get your arse out of there.”
Julia
shot the man a sharp look, thinking how awful to snap out an order to
someone who'd hit their head against a windscreen. Through the slit
in the balaclava, his pale blue eyes were luminous – and cold.
The
passenger looked to be in his mid-twenties, and horribly disfigured
on one side of his face. He groaned, and slumped forward, his head
almost in his lap.
“He
needs help. My mobile's in my bag. I'll...” A leather gloved hand
clamped suddenly and roughly around her mouth and nose, and she felt
the terrifying feeling of suffocation. Frantically, she struggled
against him, writhing, twisting, trying to kick back at his legs to
scrape her heels down his shins. Desperately aware she couldn't
breathe, she clawed at his hand, but she was being lifted bodily off
the ground, and carried back to her own car. He bundled her into her
driving seat.
“Shut
it! One sound, and the kid dies, understand?” His eyes locked onto
hers, glittering with menace.
Kill
or Die (ISBN 978-1912175147)is available from all good book stores in
paperback and Kindle.
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me on Twitter: https://twitter.com/annevansauthor
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