Earlier
this year I was again asked to judge the junior category in the
Evesham Festival of Words short story competition, which I was very
happy to do. I really enjoyed reading all the stories, and choosing
those to be short-listed and winners in both the 8-11s and 12-15s
categories. I'm so often impressed with the talent and creative
skills of our younger writers, and there were some really excellent
stories with all kinds of twists and turns.
In
the older category, the prize went to Charvi Jain for Boundless,
a story filled with
emotion which was a real joy to read. It was written with such care
and attention and swept you along with the anguish of the main
character – a young mother, trying to cope with a toddler when she
is only a child herself. There was some beautiful descriptive
narrative and not a single superfluous word to be found.
In
the 8-11 category, the young writer, 11 year old Iona Mandal clearly
has a great future ahead of her. Her story was Anne Frank Reborn.
It wasn't just the way it was written with beautiful phrasing but
this young writer had taken to heart the story of Anne Frank, and
then taken it a step further, through her death and on to her
re-birth. Iona also considered the fact that things rarely change,
people fail to learn and prejudice continues.
I
just had to admire an 11 year old's understanding and ability to
articulate their own thoughts and feelings through their writing. So
it was a really special moment to meet up with Iona at the
presentation ceremony at Evesham Town Hall on Friday. She received
her award from the Festival's special guest, TV presenter, chef and
novelist Prue Leith. Afterwards I chatted to Iona and her proud
parents and asked her what had inspired her to write this story.
Iona
who is in Year 6 at King David Primary School, Birmingham said: “My
school is a Jewish school even though I'm not Jewish. We learn about
the holocaust as it's a very important part of Jewish history. It was
through the lessons, school trips to places such as the Holocaust
Memorial Centre in Nottingham, and having a survivor of the holocaust
come to talk at our school, that I was inspired to write it – as
well as my own experiences.”
Iona
is no stranger to winning writing and poetry competitions. Her first
win was when only eight when she won the David Shepherd Wildlife
Foundation competition with a poem about poaching. Since then she's
won the Ted Hughes Poetry Award and recently she came tops in the
Wicked Young Writers competition. She also took first in The Campaign
for Nuclear Disarmament, winning herself a trip to the House of
Lords.
“I've
entered that twice. The first time I came second, and the second time
I came first,” said Iona who has her heart set on being a
cardiothoracic surgeon when she grows up – but continuing with her
writing in her spare time. “If I have any spare time,” she added
with a laugh.
I
asked Iona if she has any advice for young writers. She had this to
say: “Even if you don't win anything it is good to have a go for
the experience and the fun – and it is a great hobby to get into.
When you write you should dip your pen in your soul.”
Here's
a short extract of Anne Frank – Reborn by Iona
Mandal.
3rd September, 1944; Auschwitz: There was no moon or a star in the sky
that night. To the whistle of the last train and barking of unfriendly dogs, I arrived. In the
dead of night, in a carriage, Star of David pinned on my coat. The ground stood cold at almost
freezing point. I could see tall lamp posts and fences with barbed wires - distanced by
uniformly separated watch towers, manned by sentinels. The railway lines running aimlessly were
meshed with broken flints. The smoke from the last carriage had settled by now. As black
boughs of stark trees creaked in the ghastly wind, soldiers with blinding flash lights
shouted, ripping the eerie silence.
There was no room for confusion. Everyone seemed in haste. It was now time for roll call to separate the men, women and children.The young and old were segregated in different lines. Dad went away with able bodied men, pushed by a soldier wearing a weird symbol stitched on his sleeve - black, circled by white, bordered on red cloth. Oh! How much I hated it! Reminded me of a creepy spider with four legs!
There was no room for confusion. Everyone seemed in haste. It was now time for roll call to separate the men, women and children.The young and old were segregated in different lines. Dad went away with able bodied men, pushed by a soldier wearing a weird symbol stitched on his sleeve - black, circled by white, bordered on red cloth. Oh! How much I hated it! Reminded me of a creepy spider with four legs!
Your can read the rest of Iona's story and all
the short listed and winning entries in a new anthology entitled:
Short Stories (2) Best Stories from 2017. Available from the Evesham
Festival of Words website:
https://eveshamfestivalofwords.org/
also available from the Almonry Evesham.
http://www.almonryevesham.org/